It's been 5 days since I put this story out there. I am honestly blown away by the positive response I have gotten.

I think the comments that have made me feel the best have been about how the writing feels natural. I enjoy writing but have never put it out there for others to read so it was a little frightening, especially releasing an adult focused VN. I'm not an artist but have been able to figure out how to make the visuals acceptable. I am not a coder however I have learned and cobbled code together. Problem solving is something I love to do and let me tell you, I have caused myself some problems with that cobbled together code!

VN status:

Since I uploaded the game earlier this week I have installed and updated the graphics program on our new PC and I think I have improved on the lighting and quality of visuals. I hope you will agree.

I have written a conversation between Mitch and Jo (stock names) as well as coded in the menu's for the conversation between them before they go to the club.

I have fixed some spelling and grammar issues. It's interesting how you can proofread over and over and still miss things.

I have set my goal to have the prologue done by Wednesday evening. I split my time between writing and visuals depending on the kids. It's kinda hard to produce visual smut with kids walking in all the time.

So Sunday - writing

Monday - off for family b-day

Tues & Wed visuals for prologue.

Thank you again for being here and checking out my story.